Magdalen ([info]redisforweasley) wrote in [info]hpfsc,
2004-07-17 00:17:00
  • Mood: mellow
Title: Daydreaming
Rating: It did not make it to R. Whoops. Possibly for implication?
Words: 123. It could've been longer, but I wanted to write by the strict definition of a drabble. More challenging that way.
For: [info]dentedsky.



Trelawney would approach her desk during class, raving about Luna having the sight, entrancing her. The older woman would sweep down, touching Luna's nose with her own, and speak in undertones about responsibility, treasures, and tragedies concerning the gift. Large eyes like her own (and some patients inside St.Mungo's Psych Ward) ignored the presence of other students, focusing only on the girl before her.

Sometimes Luna leant forward, pressing her lips against her professor's. Sometimes Trelawney would gather Luna up and touch her skin, searching for the gift she herself desperately wanted, youth or sight or love, Luna didn't understand.

Afterward, Luna would close and then open her eyes, daydream ended and Trelawney looking at her like she could see inside Luna's mind.

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[info]girlchild

July 17 2004, 09:40:45 UTC 7 years ago

I loved the idea that Luna would be exactly the type of student Trelawney liked. This was really fascinating to read, and suited both ladies' characters nicely. ^^

[info]redisforweasley

July 17 2004, 10:23:04 UTC 7 years ago

Trelawney is to Luna as McGonagall is to Hermione. :)

Thanks!

[info]platoapproved

July 18 2004, 10:35:40 UTC 7 years ago

I really think that, oddly enough, they make a hilariously perfect couple.

Good job, please keep writing!

[info]redisforweasley

July 18 2004, 19:51:44 UTC 7 years ago

Haha, I agree with you. It was hard to limit this; I really could've done a lot more with it.

Thank you!

[info]dentedsky

July 18 2004, 18:53:51 UTC 7 years ago

Ooo I liked that, thank you! Especially this line:

Sometimes Trelawney would gather Luna up and touch her skin, searching for the gift she herself desperately wanted, youth or sight or love, Luna didn't understand.

[info]redisforweasley

July 18 2004, 19:54:13 UTC 7 years ago

Thanks!

I wanted to expand on that idea especially, and did a coupel of times, but I'm prone to writing long pieces versus short pieces. The challenge got me thinking about this pairing, so I might just use this drabble and write something longer.

[info]lilithchilde

July 19 2004, 11:04:19 UTC 7 years ago

Heh, that works. I can totally see Luna growing up to be much like Trelawney.

[info]lyclady

July 23 2004, 18:22:53 UTC 7 years ago

yes, please write an longer fic...

Luna/Trewlaney now there's an option.

I do agree with Redisforweasley.

Luna is Sybils Hermione..

deb
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